Days of Our Lives - MESSAGE BOARDS

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hi everyone thanks marilynn44 for finding my story. Here's chapter 10
I told you to kill him! Stefano yelled
John Black showed up. I ran so I wouldn't be caught. Patrick said
Lockhart I want Micheal eliminated. But for now I want you to go to Marlena Evans apartment and eliminate Elliot. Stefano said
He's your son. Patrick said
He betrayed me! Take him out! Stefano screamed
Patrick nnodded then left.
They're going to kill Elliot. Derek said
We have to help him. Ryan said
We're not strong enough. We're not even that far into our karotie class. Derek said
It doesn't matter we have to help Elliot. Drake said
I want to help! Tyler said
That's the sprit Ty. Ryan said
Ok everybody go grab your helmits and boards and meet me outback. Drake said then he ran out the door.
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University Hospital
Here it is Marlena Evans. Drake said opening the office door. Then walking inside followed by his three younger brothers.
What are we looking for? Ryan asked
A picture so we can see what doctor Evans looks like. Drake said
How's this? Derek asked picking up the picture of Marlena and John.
That's Elliots Doctor. Ryan said
Drake took the picture and put it in his bookbag.
Come on I have a plan. Drake said walking out of the office To the receptionist desk. Followed by his brothers.
Hi I'm Drake Pottor. This little guy is Ryan Black. He's supose to meet his grandmother here but we can't seem to find her. May I have her address? Drake asked
You look just like Marlenas husband John. the receptionist Julie said to Ryan handing Derek the address.
Thank you. Drake said walking away.
Time to save Elliot. Tyler said.
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Marlena and Johns apartment
Elliot was eating a bowl of cerel when the there was a knock on the door.
Hello. He said
UPS
Elliot opened the door and found himself face to face with Patrick Lockhart.
Stay way from me. Elliot said
Patrick pulled out a gun.
Elliot cursed then he saw something move behind Patrick.
To bad you wont make it to your high school graduation. Patrick said
That's what you think. came the voice of Ryan Dimera.
Patrick turned around to find Drake,Derak,Ryan,and Tyler.
Who are you? Patrick asked
Your wirst nightmare. Tyler said then he stomped on his foot.
Patrick yelled in pain. Then Ryan punched him in the stomach. Followed by a blow to the face by Derek. Then at the same time Elliot and Drake kicked Patrick in the head knocking Patrick out on contact.
Elliot are you ok? Ryan asked
Yeah I'm fine. What are you doing here? Elliot asked
Saving your but. Derek said
Oh that's funny. Elliot said pulling out his cell.
commisioner Carver. It's Elliot. Can you come over to Dr.Evans place?
Thanks see you then. Elliot said then he hung up
So he's on his way here? Drake asked
Yeah. You guys hungry? Elliot asked
All the kids shook their heads no.
Ok. Then sit down and wait for mom to come. Elliot ordered
I thinks he's mad. Ryan whispered
Yeah. Tyler whispered.
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Ok here it is tell me what you think.

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DoolLover08, when's the next chapter going to be?.

Next chapter will be up soon.

Is Lisa and Stefano going to be in it?.

Ok here's the 11 chapter
Police station
Patrick Lockhart. Bo said
Hello Detective Brady. Hows Hope? Patrick asked
She's fine. Where's Stefano? Bo asked
If I knew I'd tell you. He said I wouldn't get caught. And look where I am. He probably sent those bratz after me. Patrick said as John walked into the room.
They told me NuJohn was afraid of being in small places. This room is small and it already has three people in it. But three people don't make much a party. Maybe we should invite Abe and Roman inside. John said
No! Patrick yelled
So where's Stefano? John asked
I don't know. patrick said
So you weren't at the place where Stefano,Lisa,and the boys are staying? What are the boys lieing? John asked
Yeah. Kids are liers. Patrick said
Aren't they? Brady and Belle use to make me so mad when they were kids. Lie about everything. John said
Chealsie and Shawn were the same way. Bo said
What happens if I tell you where Stefano is? Patrick asked
Might drop down to lesser charges. Depends on if the DA will go for it. Bo said setting a pen and a piece of paper on the table.
You work on that. Me and Detective Brady are going to step outside for a moment. John said then he walked out of the interrigation room followed by Bo.
You don't any charges that stick to Stefano. no way in telling if he really did order Lockhart to kill Elliot. Except for the kids. But they're Stefanos kids. They wont testafie against him. John said
What about holding you prisoner for eleven years? You have the scars. That's all the evidence we need. Hope said
That's only if I press charges against him. John said
Why wouldn't you? Abe asked
He's my brother. John whispered
So what? He has distrod our family for years. Why are you protecting him? Roman asked
Because of something he told me while I was on the island. John said
And what was that? Hope asked
That he's sorry for hurting the Bradys all these years. he said he was just trying to make a good life for his family. John said
And you believed him. Roman said
He was crying. And he wasn't faking it. People change you know. John said
Everyone except for Stefano Dimera. Bo said
Excuse me I'm looking for John Dimera. A woman said
That's me. Though I perver John Black. What can I do for you? John asked
You called about my kids. I'm Lisa Dimera.
Oh that means you're my sister in law. You're kids are in here. John said leading Lisa into Romans office.
Mom! Derek,Ryan,Tyler and Drake yelled hugging Lisa.
Hey what are you guys doing here? Lisa asked
They were with me mother. Elliot said
Well get your things we're going home. Lisa said
Wait I need your address so i know where to find you. If an emergency happens. John said
Lisa smiled then said Actually we're going out of town for a couple of days.
What come on mom. I don't want to leave Salem. You can't make me. Elliot said then he ran out of the room.
Drake watched Elliot run out of the room.
Why do we have to leave? I don't want to go. I like it here. I have friends here. School and football starts next month. Drake said
You'll have to talk to your father. Lisa said as she lead the kids out of the room.
John looked around Romans office.
Hey. Marlena said walking up to John.
Hey. John said
Roman told me you're not pressing charges on Stefano for the things he did to you on the island. Marlena said
Doc.I he has done some horrible stuff. But he's my brother. I have to forgive him. I'm going to go see my son. john said then he left.
John i hope you're doing the right thing. I really hope you're doing the right thing. Marlena whispered
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Bardy Pub
Who's hotter? Orlando Bloom or Johnny Depp? Ciara asked
Orlando Bloom. Claire said
Diffenitly Bloom. Ciara said
Nick Jonas or Zack Efron? Clair asked
Um Nick Jonas. Ciara said
Your dads here. Claire said waving to Bo.
Bye. Ciara said then her and Bo walked out of the pub. Sametime Clairs cellphone went off.
Hello. Clair answered
Hey it's me. Can you meet me at the park? A stranger asked
Yeah. I'll be right there. Clair said then she ran out of the pub.
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Patrick Lockhart was arrested. Stefano said
Yeah. For Attempted murder on two people. And he had a gun pointed at our lodest son. Lisa said
He had a gun pointed at Elliot because Patrick was teaching Elliot a lesson. He's been getting in fights down town. Patrick wasn't really going to kil Elliot. Stefano said
I have to go put the kids to bed. Lisa said then she kissed Stefano on the lips then walked out of the room.
How did my kids find out what I rold Patrick? Unless. Stefano said standing up and walking out of the room reached behind the flower pot and grabed ahold of Drakes shoulder and pulled him out from behind the pot.
Hi dad. Drake said
What are you doing behind there? Stefano asked
If I tell you and you don't like my answer are you going to hire someone to eliminate me? Drake asked
You're grounded. Now go to your room. Stefano said
Drake looked at Stefano for a couple more minutes then ran up the stairs.
Stefano shook his head then walked back into his study.
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Ok there it is. i hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

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