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My fanfiction detecated to some of my favorite Dool stars
Started by Doollover08 at 2008/07/23 05:51PMLatest post: 2008/08/04 10:09AM, Views: 8531, Replies: 238
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Quote Doollover08: Hi everyone. Here's chapter seven. Dimera mansion He's letting Lucus move in. EJ whinned to Nicole as he drowned another class of whiskey. Why is Lucus moving back in? He doesn't even like this place. Nicole said He's moving in to drive me crasy. EJ said That's right. Lucus said walking into the living room. Lucus you're moving in already? NuJohn said walking into the living room. Yeah I didn't see the point in waiting. Lucus said shrugging his shoulders. Fine. Now you two boys play nice now. Don't make me send you to your rooms. John said smiling grabbing his cell phone then walked out of the mansion. Well I'm going for a swim. Nicole EJ have a nice night. Lucus said then he walked out of the room. EJ moaned then banged his head onto the chess table. -- Steve and kaylas There you go long hair and beard are gone. And you look like the john we know and love. Kayla said Awww. You love me? I love you too. john said Hey she's mine. Back off. Steve said John sighed like he was doing something he didn't want to do then he said Fine you can have her. Besides I have Marlena. She's all the woman I want and need. Dad there's something we should tell you. Belle said sitting down on the couch beside John. John looked at her then ateverybody else then back at her. Dad the reason Shawn isn't here is because he's dead. He died in a plane crash coming back from Ireland. Belle said Why were you in Irland? John asked Claire had been kidnapped. So we followed them to Ireland. Dad colleen Brady had Claire. Belle said Colleen Brady's alive. John said No she died. She had cancer and died the day after we got there. Hope said We also found out who your real parents are. ShawnD Said Really? Who are they? John asked Santo Dimera and Colleen Brady. Roman said I'm a Brady. John whispered John you've always been a Brady. Blood or not. We told you that the night of the hit and run. Bo said Yeah. I'm still waiting for my clam chowder. John said Then it's a good thing I brought you some. Caroline handing John a bowl full of clam chowder and a spoon. Thanks Caroline. John said eating some of the chowder. So Stefano is my brother. How is Stefano? John asked Well he was in a coma. Then he woke up. And now he's missing. Abe said How's Sami? John asked She's good. Her twins a boy and girl. Ally Caroline Horton and John Roman Dimera. Lexie said Dimera? John asked Johnny is EJs son. Roman said What did Sami do to find that out? John asked EJ had them run the test after mentioning how the twins look nothing alike. Roman said John shook his head then said So when do I see the rest of my family? -- Secret Dimera house What are you doing here? Stefano asked We have a problem. There's a guy named Micheal Dimera.He's the guy who helped John Black off of that island.NuJohn said Micheal Dimera? Who is Micheal Dimera? Stefano asked I don't know sir. NuJohn said Bring me Micheal Dimera. Stefano said Yes sir. John said Oh and use any force necessary to get him here. Stefano said NuJohn smiled then left. Steffy try not to hert yourself. Lisa said then she kissed Stefano on the lips. Mommy! Stefano and Lisas four year old son Tyler yelled running into the room followed by his 8,10,and 13 year old brothers Derek,Ryan,and Drake. I'm going to take Drake and Ryan to the library drop them off then i'm taking Derek and Tyler to the park. Lisa said Yeah then me and Ryan are going to walk to the store. So can we have some money? Drake asked Stefano handed Drake and Ryan both 50 dollars. See you when we get back. Lisa said then her and the four boys left. But Stefano wasn't alone. Elliot,Stefano and Lisas 16 year old son,was still there and listening to every word Stefano said She's gone. Listen to me Patrick kill Micheal Dimera. Stefano was saying Elliot gaasped then he grabbed his motorcycle keys and ran out of the house. -- ok here it is. tell me what you think.  Good Job. i like it. oh i like the names of the five boys. it's cute. 
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tetra6655 |
bump |
BethMarie |
I'm hooked |
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Rodeo_Girlie |
Morning, DoolLover08, when are you going to write the next chapter?. |
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Rodeo_Girlie |
DoolLover08, are you there?. |
Doollover08 |
Hi everyone. The eight chapter will be up soon. |
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Rodeo_Girlie |
Quote Doollover08: Hi everyone. The eight chapter will be up soon. Oh Boy I can't wait. I hope Stefano and Lisa and their five kids are in it?. |
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Doollover08 |
Sorry Rodeo_Girlie Stefano,Lisa,Drake,derek,Ryan,and Tyler are not in this chapter. |
Elliot is. |
tetra6655 |
lets get this off page 2 bump back to page 1 |
LADY_GREER02 |
bump |
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BethMarie |
Ummm DOOLover...when is the next installment? |
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Doollover08 |
Sorry everyone I was having some trouble with my computor so I couldn't post earlier so here is chapter eight. |
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LADY_GREER02 |
bump...and might i add a wonderful chapter! great job! i always did like patrick though,guess i'll have to love him even if he's a bad bad dude...he's still hott! |
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Fan_Of_Dool |
Wow, I Like It. |
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Fan_Of_Dool |
Quote Doollover08: Sorry everyone I was having some trouble with my computor so I couldn't post earlier so here is chapter eight. Bo and Hopes house John I'm glad you're home. How did you survive all these years? Sami asked I knew I had a family that loved and needed me. John said And we do love you. So does mom. She needs to know dad. Belle said And she will. John said When? When will mom find out? Bell asked When will mom find out what? Marlena asked shutting the front door. That pops is the real John Black and the man who's living in the mansion is working for Stefano Dimera. Claire said then she covered her mouth with her hand. Claire Ciara why don't you go upstaires. Shawn said Ok. the two girls said then they ran up the staires. Doc. John whispered looking at her like she's an angel sent here from heaven. Made just for him. With adoration and admiration shinning brightly in his baby blue eyes. How do I know you're the man I married? Marlena asked Because I love you. And because you can believe and trust me. John said John you said you wouldn't leave me. But you did. Marlena said Doc you have to belive me when I tell you I never wanted to leave you. I wanted to stay here and watch Claire grow up. And get a grandkid from Brady. Doc you have to believe me. John said as there was a knock on the door. Hello. Hope said opening the door. Hi you don't know me. But can I come in? Elliot asked Sure come in. Hope said Elliot walked inside Hi Elliot. Marlena said Hi Dr.Evans. Elliot said So what can we do for you? Bo asked Dr.Evans I've been lieing to you. My last name is Dimera. Not Stabler. Stefano Dimera is my father. Elliot said You're my brother. Lexie whispered Yeah. Elliot said looking very uncomfortable. Before I left the house I heard my dad on the phone talking to some guy named Patrick. My dad told him to kill a guy named Micheal Dimera. Elliot said No. Not Micheal. John whispered Micheals the guy who saved your life. Steve said Yeah and I'm guessing he's in Salem. He told me my mother told him to keep me safe. John said Which means? Belle asked That Colleen Brady's alive. Kayla said Elliot where is your father? Roman asked I can't tell you. You're a cop. I have to think about Drake,Ryan,Derek,and Tyler. Elliot said Who are they? Abe asked My younger brother. Elliot whispered. If I tell you where Stefano is will you my mother alone? Roman looked at Abe ,who shook his head yes,Then back at Elliot. It'll be like she herself told us. Roman said Ok he's at...Elliot said as he told Roman where the Dimera Secret house is. -- Docks Patrick Lockhart stood on the docks stareing down at Micheal Dimera bloody and half dead lying behind some crates. Patrick heard some footsteps coming from the staires and turned around to find John Black. The real John Black. You're Patrick I'm guessing. John said looking at Micheal than back at Patrick. That's me. Patrick said smiling What did you do to my friend? John asked How bout I show you. Patrick said Bring it on. John whispered Patrick smiled then he threw a punch at Johns head. John caught his fist elbowed Patrick in the face then he punched him in the chest sending Patrick flying into some of the crates. All of a sudden his knee was fire. And John could hardly stand. He looked back to where Patrick was and right into the gun Patrick had pointed at him. John looked away then he sucker punched Patrick in the face. Then he picked up a piece of the broken crate and hit patrick in the head. Sending the gun flying over by Micheal. John ran over and grabbed it. Put the gun down! Hope yelled Hope it's me. John said Call an ambulance. Patrick shot Micheal. John said then he looked and saw Patrick was gone. John! Bo yelled John turned around right when Patrick pulled the trigger. John heard Bo yell Hopes name. He turned to Hope and dived toward her knocking her down. The bulit went flying pat John and Hope and went through one of the wooden crates. John and Hope looked up to find Patrick was nowhere in site. Ambulance is here. Bo said helping hope up. John stood up as the paramedics came running toward them followed by Roman,Abe and Marlena. John are you ok? Roman asked Yeah. I'm fine. We'll talk later. I'm going to ride in the ambulance with Micheal. John said then he kissed Marlenas cheek. Ok. Marlena said He's lost alot of blood. Abe said as John and the Paramedics headed toward the ambulance. I hope he's ok. Marlena said then they headed to the hospital. -- Ok here's the eighth chapter. Hope you like it. Sorry again that it took so long. Ohh I like it. i wonder what stefano is going to say when he finds out that Elliot has betrayed him. but of course I know that stefano will always get out of jail. Lisa. |
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