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Quote Doollover08: Hi everyone. Here's the third chapter. Deserted Island This is as far as I can go. The guard said What is your name? The man asked The guard hesitated then said Micheal Dimera. Dimera. The guy said Mr.Brady please. Your mother asked me to keep you safe. I cannot say anymore. I have to get back before they realize I'm gone. Micheal said Wait. The guy said but Micheal was already out of sight. The guy cursed. Then he tryed to walk but ended up face down in the dirt. He rolled over onto his back. Why did he call me Mr.Brady? He asked himself standing up. Do not give up. He kept telling himself as he walked through the forest. Stoping only when the pain was unbareable. Knowing that he was on his way home helped him block out most of the pain. He heard a bang come from the ocean. He tried to run but the pain in his knees stoped him. Sounded like an explosion. He thought as he limped his way through the woods. Toward the direction of where the noise had come from. -- Fancy Face Four What happened? Belle asked I think something's wrong with the engine. Are you and Claire ok? Shawn asked helping Belle and Claire out of the boat. Ha we're fine. Belle said How are we supose to get off of here? Claire asked I don't know. Shawn said Great oi feel sfe now. Claire said Belle looked and saw a man stairing at them from the woods. Who's that? Belle asked Shawn looked Hey you! He yelled The guy limped away as fast as possible. Hey! Shawn yelled running after him. Then Shawn jumped onto the guys back. The guy cursed then fell onto his stomach. Shawn rolled the guy onto his back. Who are you? Shawn asked It's a shame you don't even know your own father in law. John. Shawn said standing up. Hi shawn. How's Belle and Claire? John asked Me,Belle,and Claire are sailing around the world. Or were. Something's wrong with the engine or something. Want me to have a look? John asked as Shawn helped John out of the woods. Dad. Belle said John smiled then he hugged her. Tinker how's your mom? Hows Brady? What are you talking about? You're acting like you haven't been in Salem for 12 years. Belle said I I haven't been. John said So who's the guy that is living in the Dimera mansion? Belle asked I don't know. Maybe it's another one of Stefano Dimeras tricks. John said Listen Belle,Claire go over and sit underneath that tree over there. Me and john are going to fix the boat. Shawn said smiling. Then we're going back to Salem. John said Cool we're going back to nutsville sooner then planed. I can't wait. Claire said in sarcasim. Claire just go over there and sit down! I am tired of your mouth! I don't want to hear one peep from you! Shawn yelled angery. His face very very red. Claire looked at him then walked over to the tree. Lets get to work. John said wondering if he should ask Shawn why he blew up at Claire like that. But instead him and Shawn got to work fixing the boat. While Belle and claire sunbathed under the tree. -- salem We know who helped Stefano escape! Hope yelled running into Romans office followed by Bo Who? Abe asked His wife. Bo said -- I'm going to keep you guys hanging on who his wife is for a while. Tell me what you think. Good chapter. I would like to know who Michael Dimera is and if John's mother told him to keep John safe, does that mean that Colleen is still alive? Oh the excitement. Sassy |
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oh good grief. |
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bump-because i really like this story and i want everyone to experience it... |
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Holy cow, you have me hooked! I can't wait to read more |
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Quote LADY_GREER02: bump Sounds good so far... keep up the good work. |
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Bravo... A Marlena ..Samantha switch would answer many things for me... Marlena isn't the same..in her dealings with John or Jr...I love fighting feisty no lose Marlena... |
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bump |
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bumpin ya to the top |
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bump bump to the top |
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Can't wait for John & Claire to rebuild their bond and can't wait for John to finally be home again. |
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Quote suzrocks: Can't wait for John & Claire to rebuild their bond and can't wait for John to finally be home again. oh oh we have competition Suz your doing a good job Doolover, keep up the good work and bring john back to Salem so he can confront that fake john Erika |
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Quote An_Excited_JM_Gal: oh good grief. you dont like my being excied about the S/L? |
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Quote sassafras: Quote An_Excited_JM_Gal: oh good grief. you dont like my being excied about the S/L? i'm glad you're excited about the s/l...i'm just glad all the way around!! |
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OMG..this is really, really good DOOLLover08....I am hooked!...When would the next installment be? |
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