Days of Our Lives - MESSAGE BOARDS

Ok here is my first attempt at a fanfiction. Please do not be mean if you don't like it don't read it. Tell me what you think. The first chapter has to do with Belle,shawn,and Claire on the Fancy Face Four. And a certain Salem hero in a dungeon.So here we go.
Chapter one

Fancy Face Four(F.F.F)
Honey where are we? Belle asked smiling rapping her arms around Shawns waist.
When you and Claire were asleep I stopped in Austrailia and feeled the tank. We are now in the middle of the Indian Ocean. Shawn said then he placed a kiss on her lips.
Good morning Mom Dad. Claire said walking up to them.
Hey Claire bear. Shawn said.
Claire rolled her eyes then asked Have you talked to John latly?
No. Your Aunt Sami answered and said John was really busy so he couldn't come to the phone. Belle said
Ha. Right. John's never busy when it comes to me. Claire wanted to say but before she could her mother said
But i did talk to Grandma Marlena and she said she can't wait to see us at Christmas.
And Grandma Hope and Grandpa Bo said they couldn't wait either. Shawn said
Hey. Christmas in nutsville. How fun. Claire thought then she faked a smile and ran back down the staires to her room.
She's so happy. Belle said
Of course she is. she's with us. She loves the ocean. Shawn said looking out into the water.
I wish my father could be here to see her. i mean Claires almost fourteen years old. My father has missed so much. Belle said almost in a whisper looking out at the waves then she walked down the staires to her and Shawns room across from Claires.
Don't worry Belle he'll come back. Someday. someday. Shawn said then he looked at the waves like the love of his life had minutes ago. And hoped that he was right.
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Dungeon on some deserted island
He has been in the dungeon 11 years,256 Days,4 hours,27 minutes,and 4 seconds.
He couldn't tell how many times he was beaten during the day. He could tell you how much pain he goes through.
He almost dies several times a day. The only thing keeping him alive is the image in his head of his wife,children,and grandchildren.
This morning he heard some of the guards talking about how the boss,the big man,the pheniox Stefano Dimera was going to blow up the island in seven days. Because the ISA discovered it was there. And Stefano wants to get red of the evidence. And that's when he knew it was time to escape if he ever wanted to see his family again.
But there's three little problems. One hes never been out of the dungeon,two the pain was to much,and three due to the starvation he doesn't have any energy to move.
But he knew that deep down there is a part of him they could never hert.
His soul.
And he knew it was his soul,his heart,and the reminder that he has people that love him that's going to give him enough energy to live through this. Enough energy to get back home to the family god made for him.

Shawn and Belle are one of my favorites as well! It'll be fun to see how they deal with "claire bear" in all her teenage glory.

I like the counterpoint, too, with the dungeon scene.

You already have my attention. I'll be back for more. The dungeon thing has me intrigued. Good stuff! Catch ya later!

That was a nice start. I will be interested in where it goes from here.

good job. well dune. oh btw can you please put me and stefano and our 5 children in your fanfic please?.

I love it can't wait for more.

Ps. BUMP!

The second chapter will be posted before 12 tonight I promise. Thanks to everyone for the good post.

Great Start! Poor John! That's a long time!!!

Good fan-fic. You are off to a great start. Love it.
Sassy

Ok I have some free time so here's the second chapter. Again has to do with Belle,Shawn,and Claire on their boat,and John on the island,and there's a scene at the police station.
Chapter two
Salem,USA
Still no whereabouts of Stefano. Abe said
Come on people can't be in comas and just disappear. Roman said looking at Steve.
stefano can. Steve said
Who helped Stefano get away? bo asked
It was to dark. Outside camras are broken so we know they didn't see anything. Abe said
You have to be kidding me! Bo yelled crossing his arms across his chest.
We're doing the best we can Bo. Roman said who was about tired of Bo yelling.
I know. I'm sorry. It's just that I don't know of our family can loose anybody else. Bo said then he walked out of Romans office knocking about everything off of his desk on his way out of the squadroom.
Roman let out a angry breath then bangged his head on his desk.
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Fancy Face Four
Claire becareful around the edge. Shawn said
Dad seriously i heard yoou the last ten times. Claire said rolling her eyes.
Don't roll your eyes at your father. Belle said
Whatever. Claire said then she walked down the staires to the lower deck.
What is up with that girl? Belle asked
She's a teenager. Shawn said
I'm going to try to get ahold of me mom. Belle said pulling out her cell then walking away.
Then you can talk to Claire1 Shawn yelled as Marlena answered.
Hi mom it's Belle.
Hey is everything ok?
I don't know mom. Claire is acting really disrespectful. What's wrong with her? Belle said sitting down
What is she doing? Marlena asked
Rolling her eyes,backtalking. Belle said
Have you disciplined her? Marlena asked
I told her to stop. She just says whatever and runs to the lowerdeck. Belle said
Belle the problem is lack of discipline when she was a kid. You have never disciplined her. Marlena said
Belle gasped then said My daughter does not have lack of discipline.
Ha she does. Shawn said interrupting.
mom I have to go I'll call you later. Belle said then she hung up. Then she looked at Shawn.
What well she does. Shanw said
You're supose to be on myside. Belle said then she ran to the lowerdeck.
Shawn shook his head then sat down. Woman. he thought.
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Dungeon deserted island
The man looked around the dungeon.
Am I going to die? He asked himself evertime somebody walked into the six foot by six foot cell he has spent a whole decade in.
I'm not going to die. They need me. He said as one of the guards walked into the room.
Here we go again. The man thought closing his eyes. But he didn't feel pain. He heard the sound of keyes rataling. He opened his eyes to find that the guard was unlocking the chains.
Why? The man asked. But the guard just unlocked the chains then left the room. The man felt blood coming out of one of his cuts that were on his chest. But he didn't ripe it away. He stood. Stairing at the door the guard had left open.
Does he want me to run to be free? Or is it a trick? Thought the man as he painfully walked mostly limped to the door.
Then a guard walked infront of the door.
I knew it was to good to be true. The man said
Come. Said the guard.
Why? The man asked
You want to be free? To go back with your family? The guard asked
Yes. The man asked still not taking one step toward the guard encase he was tricking him.
I have orders to get you away from here.
From who? The man asked
I can not tell you.
The man walked toward the guard.
Good. Let me help you. The guard said walking toward him and helping the man.
Yes. I'm going home. The man thought. Hold on Salem I'm coming.

Good Job. oh btw can you mentioned that i (stefano's wife, L) had helped stefano escape, please?. so anyway good job. keep up the good work.

Good second chapter. Sounds like Claire need a firm hand on her behind. Hope Shawn and Belle do find John and bring him home to Salem. Keep up the good work.
Sassy

I think this could go somewhere..great job...

This is really good! Can't wait for the next one.

Hi everyone. Here's the third chapter.

Deserted Island
This is as far as I can go. The guard said
What is your name? The man asked
The guard hesitated then said Micheal Dimera.
Dimera. The guy said
Mr.Brady please. Your mother asked me to keep you safe. I cannot say anymore. I have to get back before they realize I'm gone. Micheal said
Wait. The guy said but Micheal was already out of sight.
The guy cursed. Then he tryed to walk but ended up face down in the dirt. He rolled over onto his back.
Why did he call me Mr.Brady? He asked himself standing up.
Do not give up. He kept telling himself as he walked through the forest. Stoping only when the pain was unbareable. Knowing that he was on his way home helped him block out most of the pain.
He heard a bang come from the ocean.
He tried to run but the pain in his knees stoped him.
Sounded like an explosion. He thought as he limped his way through the woods. Toward the direction of where the noise had come from.
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Fancy Face Four
What happened? Belle asked
I think something's wrong with the engine. Are you and Claire ok? Shawn asked helping Belle and Claire out of the boat.
Ha we're fine. Belle said
How are we supose to get off of here? Claire asked
I don't know. Shawn said
Great oi feel sfe now. Claire said
Belle looked and saw a man stairing at them from the woods.
Who's that? Belle asked
Shawn looked Hey you! He yelled
The guy limped away as fast as possible.
Hey! Shawn yelled running after him. Then Shawn jumped onto the guys back. The guy cursed then fell onto his stomach.
Shawn rolled the guy onto his back.
Who are you? Shawn asked
It's a shame you don't even know your own father in law.
John. Shawn said standing up.
Hi shawn. How's Belle and Claire? John asked
Me,Belle,and Claire are sailing around the world. Or were.
Something's wrong with the engine or something.
Want me to have a look? John asked as Shawn helped John out of the woods.
Dad. Belle said
John smiled then he hugged her.
Tinker how's your mom? Hows Brady?
What are you talking about? You're acting like you haven't been in Salem for 12 years. Belle said
I I haven't been. John said
So who's the guy that is living in the Dimera mansion? Belle asked
I don't know. Maybe it's another one of Stefano Dimeras tricks. John said
Listen Belle,Claire go over and sit underneath that tree over there. Me and john are going to fix the boat. Shawn said smiling.
Then we're going back to Salem. John said
Cool we're going back to nutsville sooner then planed. I can't wait. Claire said in sarcasim.
Claire just go over there and sit down! I am tired of your mouth! I don't want to hear one peep from you! Shawn yelled angery. His face very very red.
Claire looked at him then walked over to the tree.
Lets get to work. John said wondering if he should ask Shawn why he blew up at Claire like that.
But instead him and Shawn got to work fixing the boat.
While Belle and claire sunbathed under the tree.
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salem
We know who helped Stefano escape! Hope yelled running into Romans office followed by Bo
Who? Abe asked
His wife. Bo said
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I'm going to keep you guys hanging on who his wife is for a while. Tell me what you think.