Days of Our Lives - MESSAGE BOARDS

No offense intended. Just constructive advise. I know you have been reading Suz thread, and you can see how easy it is follow with who is saying what, etc. Maybe you could try to write your thread in a word document and do it slowly. Then you could use quotation marks and other puncuation that would make your story easier to read. After it looks exactly how you want it, you can cut and paste into the thread. Because quality is always better than quantity. Just a thought.

Hi Everyone i am trying a different format in my storys, hope you like it


Chapter 29!!!!!!!!!


Its a warm Day in Salem, the fans are going and the A/C is at its peak, Rolling Blackouts are on the orizon!!!!!

We go to the Dimera Mansion, where John black is reading a Book!!!!

John: Where are you Rolf?
Rolf: Right here sir can i do something for you?
John:yes you can start by making a pitcher of lemonade and then call the Damn A/C company and tell them i have been waiting hours for them to come and fix the A/C in this Dump, its 92 degrees in here John says Angrily!!!!!!!
Rolf: ill get right on it sir!!!
John:Well tell them i want it done now or someone will pay grins John!!!!!!!!

at the Salem hospital, Stefano is grinning from head to toe thinking to himself if he can get john to Africa, maybee a native will strink his head!!!!!!!

Stefano: oh if only a Native could strink his head, but i need him to bring Rolf the ingredients so i better make sure he makes it out of the jungles of Africa in one piece grins Stefano!!!!!!

Lexie: Hello Father, are you ready to go home tommorrow smiles Lexie?
Stefano: oh yes i cannot wait to get home, but i can't see Alexandra!
Lexie: i have hired you a live in nurse to help you and be your eyes, she will also teach you how to use Braile smiles Lexie!!
Stefano:very good Alexandra!! i won't need Braile, if i get the Antidoe Stefano says to himself!!!!!!
Lexie: Well Father,you get some rest i will check in on you later!!

Stefano uses his phone and calls Rolf!!!

Stefano: Rolf is john on his way to Africa yet?
Rolf: Not yet sir, he is waiting for the A/C man to arrive and fix the A/C its almost 100 degrees in here!!!
Stefano: ok Rolf liston,i am coming home tommorrow and i am not going to live in an oven, so let john wait for the fool to arrive, then after he leaves, put john in that trance and have him go to the jungles of Africa and bring back the ingrdients do i make myself clear?
Rolf: perfectly Sir!!!
Stefano: very Good, now Goodbye Rolf!!!!

at Steve and kayla's penthouse!!!

Kayla: Not another fight, Stefano's Boys are always getting into fights at School!!!
Steve: ya i know sweetness, but its cause the kids on the playground tease them about who there father is and that they have no mother anymore!!!
Kayla: i guess kids can be cruel, but something needs to change, we cannot afford to put them in a private school!!
Steve: Well Sweetness there is one person we can ask for the money, and he would give it i'm sure grins Steve!!!
Kayla: oh No were not going to Stefano for money!!! he as far as i am concerned is not a fitt father!!
Steve: ok Kayla, i talked to the boys and told them to just ignore those kids or the nexttime there sent home from school cause of a fight, there lose there XBOX live!!
Kayla: you are a very good father Steve, joey and i are so happy to have you, i love you!!!!!!
Steve: i love you too Sweetness!!!!

Back at the Dimera Mansion, the A/C guy has come and left!!!!!!!

John: Now this feels so good in here now Rolf!!!!!
Yes sir it does!!!

just then Rolf presses the button and john is under his control!!!!!!!

Rolf: John i want you to go to the jungles of Africa and bring back a rare plant!!!!
John: i will obey!!!!
Also john the Dimera jet is fueled and ready to take you there, when you arrive you will meet a man and he will take you to the African villiage, where he will show you where the plant is growing, take precautions and if anyone trys to stop you from completing your mission you kill them!!!

John: very good, i will leave right now!!!

Rolf calls Stefano!!!!!!!

Rolf: john is on his way to Africa Stefano!!!!
Stefano: that is great news, once he has the rare plant and brings it back to you, i will see again and then the Games will begin, Stefano Laughs!!!!!!!!!

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!

That is much better!!!
And the story is getting juicier too!!!!
Great job

Chapter 30 should be up soon!!!!!!!

Still working on Chapter 30 should be up soon!!!

Chapter 30 preveiw!

John heads to Africa to find the rare plant that Stefano needs to cure him, Tony returns home!!!!!! vivian gives Andre news at the jail!!! and Stefano gets another visit from Marlena, Stay tuned

I am just reading this for the first time. I can’t wait for Stefano to get the cure and see what he will be up to.

I've been following, but I am a little confused. When did Rolf give Stefano this drug, and where did he get it from?

Wow. I Like It.








Lisa.

Wow. Interesting. but what about Stefano's Daughter?.

Wow. Interesting. but what about Stefano's Daughter?.

Chapter 30!!!!!!!!!

On a plane heading to Africa john is sitting drinking his champayne!!!!!!

John: are we ready to take off Pilot?
Pilot: yes we are Mr.Black, sunny skys and 95 degrees in Africa today!!!!!!!!!
John: oh Glorious another Hot Day!!!!!!!
Pilot: Fasten your seat belt here we go.
John: and pilot it would be in your best interests not to tell anyone on the radio i am on the plane, cause i am out on bail for crying out loud laughs John!!!!!!
pilot: you have my word Mr.Black no one will know!!
John: very good then lets get the show on the road or in the sky laughs john!!!!!!

at the penthouse apartments, Anna brings Tony Home!!!!!

Anna: well Tony here we are home sweet Home,i hope you can remember something smiles Anna!!!!!!!!
Tony: yes this is a very nice penthouse says Tony, but i still don't remember a thing!!!!!!
Anna: give it time honey, you will remember i just know it, after all were having a baby and you need to know our child smiles Anna!!
Tony: i will know our child Anna, but i don't remember you!! i hope in time i can remember you but until then we have to do this one day at a time smiles Tony!!
Anna: Tony honey i love you so very much and i will prove it to you if yhou let me, Anna kisses Tony and there is a smark of something!
Tony: Wow that was some kiss Anna and i did remember something!
Anna: oh Honey what did you remember?
Tony: i remember the kissing it was the passion!!!
Anna: oh Tony i knew you would remember our kissing!!
Tony: i didn't say i remember kissing you Anna, i just remember kissing sorry!!
Anna: no problem Tony, you will remember i just know it smiles Anna!!! now ill go make your lunch!!
Tony: that poor woman really wants her husband back but what if i never remember says Tony to himself!!!!!

meanwhile at the Hospital, Marlena returns to see Stefano!!!!!!!!

Marlena: Hey Stefano i'm back to see you, and see how your doing!!!
Stefano:its so good to hear your voice, id say nice to see you but i am a blind man says Stefano!!!!!!!
Marlena: someday you will see again, and until then i am here to help you get threw your condition smiles Marlena!! Stefano puts on an act!!!
Stefano: oh marlena i wish i could see you, i am so trying to change and be a better man and now i am a blind old man with nothing left crys Stefano!!!!!!
Marlena: i am here for you Stefano, i see your trying to be a better man and i am here as a friend says Marlena!!!!!
Stefano: but i am blind and may not recover crys Stefano!!!!!!! also i lost my wife and young children, i tell you i lost everything cause of Andre Dimera!!!!!!
Marlena: lets just count our lucky stars that Andre is in jail and will root there and die in prison, or hopefully get executed for all the murders he committed!!!!
Stefano: i hope your Right marlena i pray you are right!!!!!!!!!

At the Salem jail, Andre gets another visit from Vivian!!!!!!

Vivian: Hello Andre i am back to see you and give you the latest news!!!!!
Andre:Hello Vivian, and that would be asks Andre?
Vivian: i pulled it off says Vvian, you will be a free man on Friday grins Vivian!!!!!
Andre: my trial is on friday so ill be set free?
Vivian: yes you will be and won't everyone in the court room be surprised laughs Vivian!!!!!!
Andre: and the biggest surprise will be when everyone learns were getting married says Andre, what will everyone say to that asks Andre?
Vivian: there be very Surprised to say the least and once were married, john black as well as Stefano will get theres laughs Vivian!!!!!!!!!!

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!