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My stab @ the triangle-fan fic
Started by suzrocks at 2008/05/28 05:58PMLatest post: 2008/09/28 04:34PM, Views: 71362, Replies: 2263
gapeach76 |
Suz again you are doing a wonderful job. I can picture these scenes in my head as I read them. You need to apply to DOOL for a writer's position. You are doing a much better job with the triangle s/l than they are. |
suzrocks |
Quote gapeach76: Suz again you are doing a wonderful job. I can picture these scenes in my head as I read them. You need to apply to DOOL for a writer's position. You are doing a much better job with the triangle s/l than they are.  Thank you. I wonder if I really could apply??? |
alwaysEJ |
Considering some of the s/l they've tried to push on us over the years, I wonder what the qualifications are? |
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suzrocks |
Quote alwaysEJ: Considering some of the s/l they've tried to push on us over the years, I wonder what the qualifications are? I have wondered the same thing. In college I majored in English and minored in journalism. I've been doing creative writing since I was a child. I always dreamed of making a career of it. For years I have wished to write for Days, but never even tried. Maybe I should??? |
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alwaysEJ |
I also majored in English & I enjoy writing...I don't know if I could cut it as a soap writer though, as I am pretty into reality & clearly I wouldn't be able to write s/l like the triangle objectively. I'd have Lucas in jail for years while Ejami scenes would involve them making love in every place & position imaginable, occasionally playing with the twins, & discussing how immature Lucas is. |
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suzrocks |
Lisa, it will be a while because this one is going to take a while to finish... but I do promise you I will write one for you once I am done with this one. |
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alwaysEJ |
Quote suzrocks: Lisa, it will be a while because this one is going to take a while to finish... but I do promise you I will write one for you once I am done with this one. However, you never told me if you are enjoying this one at all? Suz - I'm enjoying it! You're writing considering what is best for the show as a whole, which I think is likely one of the big challenges for the writers. They have their favorites too, but they can't just write, "Lucas leaves the mansion, his monitor goes off, & he is mauled by large dogs." Also, your 'stage directions' are good...you have the characters manerisms/facial expressions down. After all, I think Sami's non-verbal behavior lately is what is the biggest tell as far as her true feelings for EJ. When she denys she loves him, she fidgets & can't make eye contact with people. |
Sunnydaz |
Quote Stefanos_Sweetheart: Quote suzrocks: Lisa, it will be a while because this one is going to take a while to finish... but I do promise you I will write one for you once I am done with this one. However, you never told me if you are enjoying this one at all? Opps. Ok. I Like It.  And I Give It 5 Smiley Faces. Lisa. Tampa Bay, FL Lisa you better be patient or i'll have to give you 40 lashes with a wet noodle. |
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suzrocks |
Thanks a bunch, AlwaysEJ! I have written 2 plays in my history of writing, and it's acutally easier to write this way than having to paint a picture like a novel... know what I mean? |
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suzrocks |
This thread has been closed per my request effective August 8, 2008. It will not be re-opened by me. |
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suzrocks |
Thank you, Lisa |
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suzrocks |
Patience, Mrs. Dimera |
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Sunnydaz |
Quote suzrocks: Patience, Mrs. Dimera  Hey everybody, there's 5 installments... make sure you read them all The sooner I can finish this little tale, the sooner I can write something for Lisa  Next time you wanna open a can of worms, i'll hit you over the head with the can first. LOLOLOL |
LeneIzLuvnEJAMI |
Quote suzrocks: EJ walks in the mansion juggling papers and his brief case while chatting away on the phone. “Yes, it’s taken care of,” he says. “Yes, I’ve got the results. It’s a no-brainer. It looks pretty cut and dry… you can count on me, yes.” He puts his belongings down and continues into the living room, to pour himself a drink while he continues the conversation. “Oh, absolutely. Well, I’m also working to bump the date up… I know your feelings about being unable to leave. Yes, I will see you tomorrow…. Thank you as well.” He hangs up, takes a deep breath and slides into a seat. Sami enters with a sad expression. “EJ, can we talk?” She asks. “Of course, Samantha.” He replies, sounding tired. She sits across from him. “I just want to apologize to you. I know I’ve said some things recently that have been hurtful and…” She begins, but he interrupts. “It’s ok, Samantha,” he says, “I know you were just being honest.” “Well, it’s not that, EJ…” She says “Oh, so you weren’t being honest.” He interrupts again. “So, you do have feelings for me?” “Of course I have feelings for you, EJ,” She says. “You’ve been… well, you’ve been great to me and the twins. I’m very grateful to you.” ”So, our love making was out of gratitude.” He shrugs. “Well, I supposed that’s better than marking your territory.” “No, EJ, it wasn’t that either… it was…” She pauses. “I was filling a void because your heart belongs to Lucas.” He gulps his drink quickly and slams the empty glass on the table beside him. “You couldn’t be more clear, Sami. I’d rather not have it thrown in my face every time I come into my own home!” He stands to walk away. “Wait!” Sami exclaims. “I … I… I’m sorry. I’m sorry things didn’t turn out differently.” “Really?” EJ asks with sarcasm. “Oh come on, EJ, you’re just as much at fault as I am… it’s your manipulations that got us into this mess in the first place!” She yells. “Yes, I suppose it is. It could never be your fault, Samantha. I take full credit, once again. Afterall, I am a Dimera so I must be at fault.” He tries to leave again. “Dammit EJ!” She yells. “I don’t want us to end this way. I don’t want…” ”US? What a farce!” He yells back. “There never was US. I was a fool to believe there ever would be. Your precious Lucas has come back to you, and we are no longer married… don’t tell ME about US!” “EJ, the annulment papers haven’t even been mailed yet… but that’s irrelevant.” She says. “No, you don’t owe me anything… but I owe you. I owe you an apology. I gave you the opportunity to apologize for your mistakes, I’m asking the same of you.” EJ simply nods, with sadness in his eyes. “You’ve been good to us… you’ve been good to me. I’m grateful.” She speaks softly, then looks at the ground. “I’m sorry I hurt you… I can’t help the history I have with Lucas. I didn’t know he was coming back.” “I understand, Samantha.” EJ’s voice cracks, and he looks to her sadly. “It was my mistake to fall in love with a woman who clearly belonged to someone else. And it was my mistake to pursue that woman, long after I knew better. If you don’t mind, I’d like a moment alone with Johnny now.” “N… n… no EJ, of course I don’t mind,” she offers a very fake smile. “Thank you,” he replies, leaving Sami standing dumbfounded. TO BE CONTINUED Hi everyone, this is the 5TH installment in this thread... please be sure to read all FIVE-THANK YOU OMG this is really good mabey the writers should take soem nots from this |
Sherlindrea |
Oh my God, suz! I'm just seeing this thread for the first time, and it's awesome... I've actually laughed out loud... "Elvis, pelvis", all the a$$ references... hilarious. And the characters are very believable - it makes sense that you have Lucas all loud and whiney, for now. The way you write him, I actually see more of his side of things... who knew?! I have confidence that you can make him more likeable. Good idea to relocate him to above the pub so he can interact with Salemites more. Maybe even help out at the bar... (but avoid becoming an alcoholic again! Side note: Why is it that everyone seems to be drinking more?). And you write Sami so well... she's just flaundering around as usual... lol. And EJ... *sigh* perhaps you could write a graphic shower scene... haha, I'll settle for one of him alone, ok? |
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