As the World Turns - MESSAGE BOARDS

I like good guys too but in this story there's no good guys that's not what this is about this is about girls who were GOOD but decided it was becoming too boring for them let's just put it that way and they wanted to become bad and look like it too and they decided unanimously to become bad ass leather girls they wanted to know and feel what it is like to be like that.The missing person and coming back tosave each other doesn't really make sense to me it's kinda weird on the other hand the part about cat fighting for the money now that was a good idea but I don't want to give this away or anything but I solved that problem with a solution that you guys will read when I post it.Now the idea of Willow to talk more about the weather in details that I'll certainly use excessively from here on throughtout the story now again you may seem some of it in Part 11 but it will continue in Part 12 on a regular basis or maybe even occasionally but I might like it so much that I'll just simply use it forever to the end.We're not even close to halfway through my story I think almost but not quite.

Willow Girl Rocks: raving: Willow Girl Rocks: Stace7: I think the girls need to get into trouble and save eachother. Come up missing and find eachother. Stuff like that. Turn on eachother than realize it was a mistake and become friends again.

Maybe they could all get in a cat fight of the money.
And maybe some good guys to come between them...or to fight over. More nice guys...I like the good guys!



I always like to see a lot of hair pulling , get ahold of an ear ring and pull it , man that will get their attention faster than a speeding bullet or a speeding locomotive.
If I'm going to fight , it will be dirty , kick them in the chest. Girls can fight just as rough as men . Do a body slam or a full nellson . What ever that is , I think you lock their arms behind their back , is that right J.D. ? You watch all that stuff on TV.


Well yeah they are some things in wrestling that you have mentioned about that some moves I like alot like the FU and the RKO and the Pedrigree moves like that the chokeslam too is a good one so they are things I can write about.

I have been working on my story now for a few days it's going well really very well.I have 18 pages written and I will probably need to write more like 6 or 7 more pages in the 20's to be able to post Part 11.I always write so many pages to keep myself ahead of what's posted and what's after that so that it's not so much work even though I like writing about it.I'm gonna talk about the emphasis of the weather from now on big time you'll hear alot of it thanks for Willow for a great idea something I didn't even think of great great kewl idea,The girls will go to Wendy's at a truck stop to eat some food while they will be close to the Woods the cooler full of pop and junk food that's more for when they will be in the Woods camping they will hardly venture out into the Woods they will be in the black trans am chillaxing watching baseball on tv or wahtever,I'm gonna do the police traffic stop situation,While Gwenney's driving to Wendy's or wahtever Maddey will talk about how she messed her room up when she moved out and Tom & Margo will actually come home to find out that NOT only Maddey has moved out but that she left a huge mess behind they are not too happy about it,Maddey will get a phone call from her math teacher to say that she failed on a couple of papers that she worked on before she left and moved out and stuff and he tells her that she will need to come to school to take an exam if she has a chance to pass her course obvisously Maddey will go back to Oakdale but without Gwenney & Alley,Maddey will steal a bright red pontiac firebird from the Wendy's parking lot and drive back to Oakdale to deal with the school stuff,Gwenney & Allie will drive forward to the Oakdale Woods and tell Maddey to phone them if she needs them or something like that.Wow that's like 6 things that I have mentioned now some of this stuff will be in Part 11 or even in Part 12 but probably the way I'm looking at it Part 12 we'll see some of the things above happening Part 11 is mostly driving to the Woods finding the guns and money and getting all leathered up and stuff so yeah.Anyways what do you guys think of what I wrote???.


PART 11 IS COMING SOON!!!!

It really does seem interesting doesn't it Willow lol lol???.

I have finished pages 18 and 19 last night I'm on page 20 and I may have to write at least another 3 or 4 maybe even 5 pages 6 maybe less till I can post Part 11 it's getting to be really good I'm at the part right now don't wanna give alot away but the girls just left the abondoned house and sped away down the road driving to the Wendy's at the truck stop and the cop is from a not so close distance is following them and sees them speeding big time he will stop them real soon.But in the meantime Maddey will tell her story about how she messed up her room to say thanks to Tom & Margo for kicking her out for sleeping with Casey on the couch before she moved out I think Gwenney helped too. Maddey will tell her story then then they will get stopped by the cops then after they dealt with him then they will get hungry and continue on to the Wendy's and then we'll go on from there.After eating or so Maddey will get a phone call telling her to come back to Oakdale to do an math exam if she wants to pass her course she agrees and goes but might not take the exam or fail miserably wahtever so she'll steal a red firebird and go back home while Gwenney & Alley go the other way on to the Woods and relax!!!!.

I did almost 2 pages last night I have done about 21 almost 22 pages.I did Maddey's story of how she messed up her room at tom & margo's house and I'm about to do the chase scene before they get to the Wendy's.After the chase I'll do Tom & Margo coming home to find the mess.After that the girls will eat at the Wendy's then after Maddey will get a phone call saying she has to go back to Oakdale she'll steal a red firebird and go back home while Allie & Gwenney will go the other way to the Woods.Then I'll move on from there but pretty soon I shall post Part 12 I know raving and Willow and Stace 7 wanna read it right so anyways things are going good I don't work on it everyday but I try to.

The officer's name that pulls over to check out the black trans am is Thomas Ramirez and this isn't going to be the normal traffic stop that you would normally see it's gets really ugly not too long.I'm at the part now where Gwenney starts fighting Ramirez with Allison having her gun pointed at Ramirez down on the ground on the road.I have done 26 pages including more than half on another one which makes 27 and I'm ALMOST done with the police stuff Gwenney & Allie taking turns beating the crap out of Ramirez but they don't kill him though which I said before that they were not going to but just leave him hurting alot that's all. Ramirez is actually lucky that they DON'T wanna kill him so yeah.I should be able to post Part 12 pretty soon either today or wahtever sometime.

I'm so happy and really proud this is some of my best work.Again a reminder Part 12 is COMING SOON!!!!

Ok folks here we go I'm gonna post Part 12 I know I know you guys have been waiting for this for like quite awhile now and so anyways here goes NOTHING here's Part 11 Part 12 will be later on obvisously but for now Part 11 ENJOY!!!!.



The Oakdale Blood Warriors are in a dark alleyway behind the clothing store Fashions in Old Town then all of a sudden they hear loud police sirens so they bolted out of the alleyway and headed to the auto body shop.

Johnny's "We Smash Em N' Cash Em" Wreckers Yard - July 8th, 2008 - 3:55 A.M.

The Oakdale Blood Warriors Maddey,Alley and the leader Gwenney get to the Wreckers Yard and they already found the Hot Black Pontiac Trans Am with Dark Black/Purplelish Windows and Alley went to peek in the window and she saw awesome leather seats radio/CD built in and etc. but she saw that the keys were not in the ignition therefore they know it could be in the office behind the long steel metal sliding gate.

Gwenney: Ok now we're here let's get the Trans Am out of here.When we leave with the Tranny me and Allison are riding shotgun and of course Maddey will ride in the back.Now where's the keys Alley ummm Alley???.

Alley: Ummmm Gwenney I think that we have ummm kinda a big problem here sorta a real big problem.

Gwenney: Well what's the friggin big deal big problem over there Alley???.

Alley: Well there happens to be no keys in the HOT Sexy Black Trans Am I can't even open the door crap damn man.

Gwenney: Well ok I guess that your gonna have to ummm hop over the fence break into the office and snatch the keys and anything else you might wanna steal ok and we are me & Maddey are gonna chill and wait for you with the bags and all so yeah good luck.

Alley said thanks to Gwenney and then she got a boost from Maddey and up and over Allie goes over the long metal steel sliding gate.Over on the other side of the gate Allison jumps down and heads to the office.When Allie got to the door she somehow picked the door lock and she gained entry to the office and she saw the Trans Am keys and she put them in her pocket and then Alley looked around the offcie.Alley didn't really find anything good or very interesting so she just took a couple of pops from the fridge and a couple cheese sandwiches and put them in a plastic bag and she also took a Pepsi and also put it in the bag and then she walked outside and walked right up to the gate and said hey Madds Gwenney I mixed us a little early morning snack and they say that's great and awesome throw it up Gwenney's open.Ok so Maddey said that Gwenney's open and so Alley took the bag and threw it up and over the fence and Gwenney caught the bag and held onto it.Then Alley went back to the office and she decided NOT to really take anything but then she thought that maybe she should take a 14" television set so then she unplugged it and and started to carry it outside under her shoulder and then she closed the office door and went up to the door and slowly climbed up the gate and she got to the top of it and she dropped the tv and Maddey got it and then she dropped down from the top of the gate.

Alley: ok Gwenney here we go we now own the Hot Sexy Black Trans Am!!!! (Alley said with a evil laugh).Ok Gwenney (flips the keys to her as leader of The Oakdale Blood Warriors you get to drive the Black Trans Am!!!!).

So Maddey put the tv set in the trunk after Gwenney opened it and the bags with all the leather stuff was put in the back seat which there's like 8 or 10 bags full of really hot leather stuff.So Maddey goes and sits in the back seat next to the leather clothes,Alley goes and sits in the passenger seat and she sits down on really soft leather seats (front & back).Gwenney shuts the trunk and then gets inside the Hot Sexy Pretty Kewl Black Trans Am and she slams the door and so Gwenney puts the black keys into the ignition and starts up the Black Tranny and it really purrrs like a really nice sexy kitten.Alley got out of the car because Gwenney said to Maddey to spraypaint a nice nasty message for when workers to see when they show up for work oohhh in the next hour hour and a half.Gwenney checked her watch and it reads 4:44 A.M. and so she said hurry the hell up Madds we've got at least approx. 2 mins. here then we are blowing this joint and we're going to find a place to steal some really F - - - - - G Hot Black T2 Shades!!!!!.So Maddey got out of the trans am and went to the gate and spraypainted "THANKS FOR DONATING YOUR HOT SEXY BLACK TRANS AM....NOT YOU GUYS SUCK & ARE LOSERS!!!!" THE OAKDALE BLOOD WARRIORS and that was spraypainted in very light purple spraypaint and then Maddey walked back to the Trans Am got into the back seat and then Allison got back in the passenger seat and slammed the door.Then Maddey wasn't really feeling hungry so she handed the bag of food up to the front where Gwenney & Allie where sitting and Alley took the car door and slam it shut.Alley also put the bag in between herself and both Alley and Gwenney took a sandwich from the bag.

Gwenney: Ok ummm we're gonna go in a minute but our next stop is the place that sells hot black T2 Shades and bandanas like a tattoo shop or something like that ok and then after that we are gonna stop someplace and ummm change into our F - - - - - G hot black leather clothes and hot black T2 shades and then afterwards we'll continue our way to the Oakdale Woods!!!!!.Then we'll go to the place after leaving the Woods to rest & relaxation big time and just chilling out so yeah.


SOME NEWS & UPCOMING SPOILER LATER ON!!!!

There you go guys Part 11 is posted and like I said before Part 12 will be coming later on.K I have done the weather talk,the police stuff,Tom & Margo coming home,Maddey's story and right now I'm at the part where the Warriors stopped at the WENDYS to eat some food and they see the hot red trans am in the parking lot and they just look in awe of it Maddey's falling in love with it right away and then they go inside and start eating and the owner of the red trans am is also eating too and he's a Yankees fan and the Warriors are NOT Yankees fans they LOVE the Boston Red Sox right so that will be a factor when the girls leave but before they ambush the owner let's say Maddey will get the phone call that she didn't wanted to have and no it's NOT Tom & Margo not too happy about the mess she left behind but it's of all people her math teacher Mr. Vernon wahtya know Maddey's in some trouble in math class and she is summoned to come to school to take that exam or she'll fail math and Maddey doesn't care but she will go back and deal with it anyways and in the process she have the red trans am to come back home with.Gwenney & Allie will beat up the dude who used to own the red trans am ha ha ha ha once again about the police stuff he did get hurt badly Thomas Ramirez is his name but then after awhile the girls left with smoke still all around he got help and in touch with his department and he is recovering and doing well at home.Well that's it for now I hope you guys enjoy Part 11 I made a mistake when I said I didn't do Part 12 when I haven't done Part 11 so anyways Part 11 is done.Sorry for the mixup mistakes happen whenever right lol lol.


PART 12 WILL BE COMING SOON!!!!

Isn't anybody interested in reading my wonderful kewl story huh???.I just did Part 11 peeeps.

I kinda like the script layout

Yeah anything else you liked about it besides the script format???.You like the girls being really bad ass punks or NOT or really do you prefer the lovely nice goody goody 2 shoes routine???.