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For the 1st time in a long long time I finally worked on my story last night I got a page and a half done it felt so so glad and exciting to start working on it again.Right now I don't want to give up too much for those of you who haven't read it yet.The girls found some handguns,some rounds of ammo and right before they leave Gwenney sees something by the front steps looks like something like wallets or something like that so yeah.Then afterwards they leave and they go to the Oakdale Woods which they are more than halfway there by now.They will seems to me to get more badder in terms of when the police start chasing them they will really disregard with total disrespect when it comes to hurting the officer they will NOT guaranteed I guaranteed kill him that's for sure but they will hurt him really badly and severely he will be all right he won't be crippled but he will be in some pain and discomfort let's put it that way but again he won't die!!!!.Once again it's good to be working on my story again.Can't wait for monday's show to come to see waht happens with Chris & Allie. |
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Quote JOHNNYDUDE: For the 1st time in a long long time I finally worked on my story last night I got a page and a half done it felt so so glad and exciting to start working on it again.Right now I don't want to give up too much for those of you who haven't read it yet.The girls found some handguns,some rounds of ammo and right before they leave Gwenney sees something by the front steps looks like something like wallets or something like that so yeah.Then afterwards they leave and they go to the Oakdale Woods which they are more than halfway there by now.They will seems to me to get more badder in terms of when the police start chasing them they will really disregard with total disrespect when it comes to hurting the officer they will NOT guaranteed I guaranteed kill him that's for sure but they will hurt him really badly and severely he will be all right he won't be crippled but he will be in some pain and discomfort let's put it that way but again he won't die!!!!.Once again it's good to be working on my story again.Can't wait for monday's show to come to see waht happens with Chris & Allie. It's a good thing you aren't going to kill a cop , I'm glad you remembered that I told you that if you did, I would track you down and whoop up on you. My daughter-inlaw lost her career as a cop because she was hurt in the line of duty. So I get a little touchy when it comes to cops getting hurt. So don't be to rough on him , ya hear me ? JohnnyDude , I'm waiting on you to post some more of your story. Keep it up. |
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Hey Willow thanks for replying to what I said it was good and I understand what comes to mind right away when anything with cops is mentioned so I'm glad I said what I said so that you wouldn't have to worry that much and that it would put you at ease.I have done some work on my story like I said earlier but I still have to do maybe a few more pages before I can post it it will take some time but at some point I'll post it and maybe more than one person can read it and reply about it so yeah.But I just wanted to say again thanks for saying what you said it means alot to me. I'll keep posting from time to time. |
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Quote JOHNNYDUDE: Hey Willow thanks for replying to what I said it was good and I understand what comes to mind right away when anything with cops is mentioned so I'm glad I said what I said so that you wouldn't have to worry that much and that it would put you at ease.I have done some work on my story like I said earlier but I still have to do maybe a few more pages before I can post it it will take some time but at some point I'll post it and maybe more than one person can read it and reply about it so yeah.But I just wanted to say again thanks for saying what you said it means alot to me. I'll keep posting from time to time. I'll be counting on you , so don't let me down. Your pal. |
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Quote JOHNNYDUDE: Hey Willow thanks for replying to what I said it was good and I understand what comes to mind right away when anything with cops is mentioned so I'm glad I said what I said so that you wouldn't have to worry that much and that it would put you at ease.I have done some work on my story like I said earlier but I still have to do maybe a few more pages before I can post it it will take some time but at some point I'll post it and maybe more than one person can read it and reply about it so yeah.But I just wanted to say again thanks for saying what you said it means alot to me. I'll keep posting from time to time. We all want to read more JD! |
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Really well when I was writing Parts 1 - 4 5 myabe nobody really reply back to it that much so to me it seems like why would anybody start replying back to it now I mean I'm in good hopes and I want you guys to reply but a couple of years ago I saw and thought that nobody wanted to reply to it they have read it but didn't really say much so I hope that now things will change and hopefully it will change big time so yeah.I wanna know what people like or maybe dislike about my story??? I'm always curious because I'm always wondering what people are saying and/or thinking as well so yeah.Maybe this time things will change big time.So let's start throwing out are thoughts and stuff let's talk more about this than ever before.It hurts when nobody really responds to my story it gets to me sometimes.Thanks for believeing in me Willow. |
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Quote JOHNNYDUDE: Really well when I was writing Parts 1 - 4 5 myabe nobody really reply back to it that much so to me it seems like why would anybody start replying back to it now I mean I'm in good hopes and I want you guys to reply but a couple of years ago I saw and thought that nobody wanted to reply to it they have read it but didn't really say much so I hope that now things will change and hopefully it will change big time so yeah.I wanna know what people like or maybe dislike about my story??? I'm always curious because I'm always wondering what people are saying and/or thinking as well so yeah.Maybe this time things will change big time.So let's start throwing out are thoughts and stuff let's talk more about this than ever before.It hurts when nobody really responds to my story it gets to me sometimes.Thanks for believeing in me Willow. Well J.D. Raving and I weren't on this board a couple of years go. We are now ..so put on your thinking cap , let us help you if you want us to. |
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Willow Girl Rocks: JOHNNYDUDE: Really well when I was writing Parts 1 - 4 5 myabe nobody really reply back to it that much so to me it seems like why would anybody start replying back to it now I mean I'm in good hopes and I want you guys to reply but a couple of years ago I saw and thought that nobody wanted to reply to it they have read it but didn't really say much so I hope that now things will change and hopefully it will change big time so yeah.I wanna know what people like or maybe dislike about my story??? I'm always curious because I'm always wondering what people are saying and/or thinking as well so yeah.Maybe this time things will change big time.So let's start throwing out are thoughts and stuff let's talk more about this than ever before.It hurts when nobody really responds to my story it gets to me sometimes.Thanks for believeing in me Willow. |
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Quote JOHNNYDUDE: Willow Girl Rocks: JOHNNYDUDE: Really well when I was writing Parts 1 - 4 5 myabe nobody really reply back to it that much so to me it seems like why would anybody start replying back to it now I mean I'm in good hopes and I want you guys to reply but a couple of years ago I saw and thought that nobody wanted to reply to it they have read it but didn't really say much so I hope that now things will change and hopefully it will change big time so yeah.I wanna know what people like or maybe dislike about my story??? I'm always curious because I'm always wondering what people are saying and/or thinking as well so yeah.Maybe this time things will change big time.So let's start throwing out are thoughts and stuff let's talk more about this than ever before.It hurts when nobody really responds to my story it gets to me sometimes.Thanks for believeing in me Willow. Well J.D. Raving and I weren't on this board a couple of years go. We are now ..so put on your thinking cap , let us help you if you want us to. Well of course I want you and anybody else to help me do you have any kind of ideas you guys can share with me I mean it's doesn't too bad the way it is written now but you know there's always room for improvement right lol lol so yeah.I am so so in love and enamoured about the whole bad ass leather girl thing it;s very very weird I know but I just can't help it I love it so very very much.You guys have both read all 10 parts right??? just checking lol lol what did you think about those 10 parts and so on??? Do you like the bad ass leather girls in general???.Let's talk about these things would you read part 11 and the rest till it's finished???.I'm wondering all of these things lol lol. I would read them. I would like you to mention the weather more. When the bad girls are driving around , it could be storming in the fall , or snowing in the winter time. They could have a spin out on the ice or snow , not get hurt or anything like that , but it would add more action and drama to your story . |
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Yea that's good Willow I have thought about it writing more about the weather that's something to take into good consideration I'll write more details about the weather. Maybe make it really hot,really cloudy black clouds and thunder,some snowfall and rain as well so there's lots to think about in terms of writing specific details about the weather.Now you may not see any of it in Part 11 unless there's some at the end but from the start of Part 12 and on then we'll see more and more of it so maybe there will be some in Part 11 but I'm not sure.I think it will add more action and drama to my story as well just didn't think about it before but thanks again.Any more advice from you or raving or anybody else???. |
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Quote JOHNNYDUDE: Yea that's good Willow I have thought about it writing more about the weather that's something to take into good consideration I'll write more details about the weather. Maybe make it really hot,really cloudy black clouds and thunder,some snowfall and rain as well so there's lots to think about in terms of writing specific details about the weather.Now you may not see any of it in Part 11 unless there's some at the end but from the start of Part 12 and on then we'll see more and more of it so maybe there will be some in Part 11 but I'm not sure.I think it will add more action and drama to my story as well just didn't think about it before but thanks again.Any more advice from you or raving or anybody else???. I was waiting for someone else to give us some ideas J.D. |
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I think the girls need to get into trouble and save eachother. Come up missing and find eachother. Stuff like that. Turn on eachother than realize it was a mistake and become friends again. |
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Quote Stace7: I think the girls need to get into trouble and save eachother. Come up missing and find eachother. Stuff like that. Turn on eachother than realize it was a mistake and become friends again. Maybe they could all get in a cat fight of the money. |
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Quote Willow Girl Rocks: Quote Stace7: I think the girls need to get into trouble and save eachother. Come up missing and find eachother. Stuff like that. Turn on eachother than realize it was a mistake and become friends again. Maybe they could all get in a cat fight of the money. And maybe some good guys to come between them...or to fight over. More nice guys...I like the good guys! |
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Quote Willow Girl Rocks: Quote Stace7: I think the girls need to get into trouble and save eachother. Come up missing and find eachother. Stuff like that. Turn on eachother than realize it was a mistake and become friends again. Maybe they could all get in a cat fight of the money. Yes one could steal the money and run off, with the remaining ones being pretty ticked they track that bad girl down and she gets a good butt kickin by the other girls. But since she hid the money on her way into hiding they need to hold her prisioner until she can lead them to the hidden money. |
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